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Corset II by =kittiquin:iconkittiquin:

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Corset.

Part of the "pornographic" section of my Victorian Portraits Series.

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*foreverstrange Jul 12, 2009, 5:16:23 AM
I like the coy way you hold your shoulders, and the skirt sits a little better in this one.
I'd like it better if you had bare legs.
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Sorry to be cutting.

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Miss you already, Michael.
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=kittiquin Jul 18, 2009, 4:39:13 AM
I sort of like the hesitancy of the pose, and the face, but I think my back was a bit too hunched. I began the shoot in stockings, and decided against them after the first couple of shots. So the rest of them are stocking-less. (Though stockings-on is a bit more historically accurate - the first things a Victorian lady would do is put on her stockings and shoes, as once the corset was laced she wouldn't be able to bend over.)

This shoot was really quite disappointing, I only ended up with two shots that I like at all, and neither of them do I like enough. You are not being cutting, I feel quite critical of them too.

what is it about the skirt that you don't like?

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oh, I don't know.
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*foreverstrange Jul 21, 2009, 7:33:34 AM
You could be right about your back, but when I'm cold I do that with my back, so maybe that's what's behind your position?
I think maybe I would have liked plain stockings?
But, they might go unnoticed... Hmm, no verdict there.
I don't really like the skirt as it's rather unflattering compared to the stockings and, of course, the corset... Unless it's a petticoat of sorts? (That would make sense as you are only in your corset, an under-garment -_-" *duh*..)
Hmm, I think I like the top half of this image, but the bottom half is sort of disjointed to look at for me.

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Miss you already, Michael.
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=kittiquin Jul 26, 2009, 8:24:52 AM
it is a petticoat. Not really a Victorian one though.

yeah, it was freezing in the studio, and there I was in my underwear. Plus, I was a bit nervous. This is the only one of the pornography pieces that I shot in the school studio, and I was so paranoid that one of my professors would come in or something, and... there would be me, in my underwear. So I wasn't really relaxed, and I couldn't make costume changes when I didn't like the way things were turning out, because everything was at home.

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oh, I don't know.
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*foreverstrange Jul 29, 2009, 4:04:59 AM
Mmkay. Well, like I said, I like most of the image.

I can see why that would put you on edge!
Well, in future projects, perhaps warn the professors first?

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Miss you already, Michael.
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